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First Seven Tips For Writing News Stories

A good first sentence. (via GQ.com)

A good first sentence. (via GQ.com)

There are lots of different kinds of journalism writing, from news to features to reviews to obituaries to sportswriting to many, many others. People spend a career developing their skills in each area, so you can’t really learn it all in one go.

You’ve got plenty of time to develop your own style. But it’s good to master the basics first, and these are some tips to get you started with writing simple news stories. The kind you see online and in newspapers all over the world every day.

1. Get to the point

Put the most important piece of news in the first sentence. And try to include the Who, What, Where, When and Why of the story as early as you can. This isn’t an essay, so you don’t need any kind of introduction before you get to the interesting stuff.

2. Include the sources of any opinions

Take care to attribute statements you include in your article to whoever made them. For example, ‘The decision not to send the criminal to jail was a disgrace, according to the victim’s family‘. Otherwise it just looks like you’re putting your own opinions in. Save those for comment articles and columns, not news stories.

3. Your story doesn’t need a ‘conclusion’.

Student journalists often feel they need to include a sentence or two at the end of an article, summing things up like the conclusion to an essay. Don’t. If you’ve already gone over all the important details, there’s no need to re-state them at the end. News stories generally just finish, usually with a quote from somebody.

4. Write in short sentences.

Short sentences make articles easier to read. Writing like this is sometimes tricker than it looks, especially if you’re used to writing essays. The best tip I can give you would be to try to avoid using commas unless you really have to.

5. Use two short words instead of one long one.

If you’re looking at an article and you don’t understand a word, it’s a pretty big turn-off. So give your readers some help. You might know what ‘facilitate’ means, but ‘make easier’ is much better.

6. Don’t mix up your tenses

It’s not a hard-and-fast rule, but generally newspaper and online news articles are written in the past (or future) tense, while broadcast scripts for radio and TV are in the present tense. Changing between the past and present tense in the same article can be off-putting, so try to stick to one.

7. Avoid using journalism clichés

There are hundreds of words and phrases used every day by journalists that are actually quite strange if you think about it. Sometimes these can be useful ways of explaining complicated things, like “test tube baby”. But more often you get scientists as “boffins” or an unhappy footballer making “a come-and-get-me-plea” while a celebrity is spotted “quaffing” Champagne. There are simple words in plain English for these things, so please use them instead.

The picture of Hemingway that appeared with the first edition of For Whom The Bell Tolls.

The picture of Hemingway that appeared with the first edition of For Whom The Bell Tolls.

Some further reading. In 1946, George Orwell offered a list of six rules for good writing (at the bottom of this essay) and they still stand up well today.

On the point about short sentences, a survey some years ago found that journalists’ favourite novel was For Whom The Bell Tolls by Ernest Hemingway. Hemingway was himself a journalist-turned-author, and it showed in how he used short sentences and rarely included commas. Give it a read.

And on journalism clichés, it’s worth looking at John Rentoul’s The Banned List (online and in book form) as well as Rob Hutton’s Romps, Tots and Boffins, which you can get a free sample of for Kindle here.

The ExLeedsMedia Twitter List

The Parky building. Not named after the chat show host.

This week I’m starting a run of sessions teaching various online skills to broadcast journalism students at the University of Leeds. One example of how much journalism has changed since I did the very same course a decade ago is that back then we were taught very little about the internet. Tablets were, I’m afraid to say, something you took the morning after a few midweek pints of cheap beer in the Old Bar.

As I’ve already explained in a previous post, I believe it’s important for today’s student journalists to be on Twitter. But just having a Twitter account isn’t nearly enough. I’m keen to help the students get the best out of it for themselves and for their journalism. To that end, I’ve begun to curate a list of Leeds alumni who now work in the media. You can find the list here: http://twitter.com/#!/rlwjones/exleedsmedia

There are two main reasons for doing this. The first one is that many of the traditional graduate-level media positions which were still relatively widely available back when I left Leeds, such as jobs in commercial or BBC local radio, have either gone or are going. Student journalists need to think about their future careers earlier, to help give themselves more options when graduation time comes. I hope that looking at the successful careers many Leeds graduates are enjoying in various parts of the media will help and, yes, maybe even inspire them.

The second point is rather more prosaic. ‘It’s not what you know, it’s who you know’ is such a dreadful cliché it should be a candidate for John Rentoul’s banned list. But there’s no doubt a contact here or there can be extremely valuable. If a student sees a Leeds graduate tweeting about doing a job they’d like to do, there’s no reason why they couldn’t get in touch and ask for a bit of advice, a bit of work experience, or whatever. Less social network, more social networking, if you like.

That link to the list again: http://twitter.com/#!/rlwjones/exleedsmedia

If you know of anyone you should be added, then tweet me @rlwjones. They don’t have to have done the broadcast journalism degree, the list is for anyone who went to Leeds and is now in some part of the media.

(Thanks to @rowanc and @hr_smith for their help in suggesting people!)